From my critique, I learned that my font was off. Some people also didn't like the white background or other small things about the literal photo, such as flipping the picture, but we all agreed that there wasn't anything we could do about them (the word NIKON would be backwards etc). I did know that I could change the font. I decided to do a little research. I looked up what font the NIKON logo is, and found out it was basically just Arial but bolded and in italics. The only difference is that the "i" is an oval. I put this font onto my words, and initially it looked very odd. I had to kern my lines and space them out using even spacing. I kept my first letter the biggest to balance out the largest camera, and I made sure the quotation marks were the same size as the rest of the letters. Overall, I didn't have huge changes to make, but I think that they made my piece much easier to look at.

When the critique process was taking place, I had a lot of good comments about my slide and only a few minor adjustments to be made. By being told these corrections, I learned how to make my slide look more believable that a professional did it and how to make kids and adults look at the slide. One of the suggestions was for me to make sure that my mickey mouse wasn't in the way of one of the flags, because the castle is just as important of the idea of Disney as mickey mouse is. The next thing I did was brighten the picture a little bit, to make the slide look more excited and colorful. Once I did that, it made the slide look like it was having fun and it wants to be seen by many people. The last thing I did was that I fixed Mickey Mouse's bow ties. I was told before that the Mickey Mouse heads were a good addition to the slide, so I wanted to make them well noticed. I played around with the shapes and I found a circle and put it onto the bow tie to add just a bit more color to the Mickey Mouse head.

I wanted to keep my message the same but make it more clear and simple. I basically started over entirely because I felt that the initial idea got lost in the creation of my previous slide. This is why I chose a different background. I wanted to use something that was more related to the message. The road that leads into the sunlight works because though one may not always know what lies ahead they should always keep moving. I made the message move across the road because I thought that it was more eye catching. The color scheme works better together. And though there's a lot less on the page the slide works better. 

1. While I received feedback from the class I realized the most minor details can completely change the opinion of someone, about your slide.

Changing the slide was a thought process for me to rethink about the way I can change the slide better. Reflecting on the critiquing from my colleagues, I took notes in my mind to think about the way I can the slide more about the resource than just based on the way I thought about the Me Magazine. The first thing that I changed is the photo I used and cropped it out to just focus on the three of us. Second, a lot of the classmates said that the word "Me Magazine of Me" should just be in a different font and not in slant where it makes the image irrelevant. The words in white was changed to being the the center rather than have the words in the corner which will disturb the whole slide itself. One thing that disturbs myself is not able to get rib of the lines around the red words. I added a text box and it just stayed there as it is. I was hoping to have the dark background to pop out the white and red words so it is clear to the viewer. I tried as much to keep the image to fit in instead of having it to be stretched out, which will make the image more disturbing to look at.    

 I re-organized my slide using placement, I changed the placement of the words so that they would lie on the hands. I thought this would help keep the readers attention and increase the efficiency of the font color to make it more appealing and creative.

I learned from my critic what font a should change and how to make it pop more.