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Bee - Ahorita 20/9

Posted by Breeanna Noi in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​"Mi familia está muy grande y todo por el mundo."

My refrain is supposed to communicate about how my family is the main part of where I'm from and I have no original home since I moved so much at such a young age.

I'm happy about the fact it's all about me. It's not about my location, but all about the people in my life. Even if they're not biological relatives, I still consider them family.

I would like to add more to my refrain.

The problem I had with writing the refrain was to find a theme to go with the song. To me, choruses are like thesis sentences. Every other verse has to relate back to it.

My Refran

Posted by Gabriel Pingitore in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Yo soy de vuelta en el día.

Essentially, my refrán means "I am from back in the day." And it's suppose to show that even though we're all growing up, I'm from the times I grew up in. And sometimes people forget that. Childhoods mean so much, because they create who we are now. And I'd just like to honor the "back in the day" for me.

Generally, it's a short yet very effective refrán. After words explaining my childhood, I can simply end it with "​Yo soy de vuelta en el día." Which, I feel would compliment the rest of the song. Kind of like a nice little spice on a bland meal. 

Really, I have nothing against my ​refrán. I may need to check the grammar to make sure it means what I'm implying, but other than that there's nothing that needs to be added. Maybe if I wanted to, I could add something specifically I liked about "back in the day" onto it to emphasize its meaning.  

I had no real problems writing my refrán. I knew from the beginning I wanted to write about my childhood. Given, it's not the most amazing childhood around, but I have to give credit when credit is deserved. Because of how I grew up, I became who I am today. So I owe everything to those times. From my parents to my own experiences. And I'm sure I can interpret that in a very excellent way.

Yang Refran

Posted by Allen Yang in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Yo vengo de tierra de mi padres 
Vengo de Estados Unidos 
Vengo de Filadelfia 
Vengo de Patria

This refran basically speaks of my background, where I am. Although I wasn't born in a foreign country, my parents were. And I'd say that half of me belongs there and the other big half is here. I'd still call it the homeland, because of my ethnicity. 

I'm happy I even got something out of it. It might not be an original idea, but it's where I'm just from, and that it was hard to describe something that wasn't physical.

Adding more lines, make it sound more advanced or at least not so simple as to where I'm literally from, more like something you'd have to think deeper into. 

The only thing that was difficult was actually trying not to sound like everyone else. 





Mi cacion :]

Posted by Longnu Nhan in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Refrán:
Yo vengo a Vietnam
La comida es increíble

My refrain is suppose to tell people about where I'm from and about my food. I love food! I'm happy to say that I'm from Vietnam. I would like to add more than 2 lines. It has to go with the rhythm. One thing that was difficult for me was to go with the syllables to my original english song. It just has to go with the beat. 

De dnde vengo yo? - refrn

Posted by Jessica Hinton in Spanish 3 - Gierke on


¿De dónde vengo yo?
¿De dónde vengo yo?
​Vengo de pequeño ciudad
Famosa comida y museos
Es gran... lugar... estar. 

- My refrán is supposed to communicate just a small glimpse of Philly. Just something short.
- I think for my first draft I did well with organizing my thoughts.
- I think I should make sure that it goes along with the music.
- The difficult part was making sure I didn't put anything in the refrán that may fit better in a verse. 

Donde de vengo yo?

Posted by Marley Utzig in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

De donde vengo yo?
Yo vengo de mi casa
Yo vengo mi mama
Yo vengo de mis actividades favoritas

Yo vengo en mi casa
Mi casa es en filidelfia
Yo nacido en California
Mi casa es muy cómodo

Yo vengo mi mama
Mi mama es cómica
Yo mama y papa muy enamoradas con
Mi mama es estupendo

De donde vengo yo?
Yo vengo de mi casa
Yo vengo mi mama
Yo vengo de mis actividades favoritas

Yo vengo de mis activitdades favoritas 
Me gusta leer
Me gusta pasar un rato con amigos
Me gusta escuchar música

De donde vengo yo?
Yo vengo de mi casa
Yo vengo mi mama
Yo vengo de mis actividades favoritas

(I like the chorus. I need to check all my lyrics to be sure they are correct. In the song I talk about where I am from my hometown and my love of music. I think I am going to do something quick and simple for the tune.)

My Chorus Thingy

Posted by Sergey Kuznetsov in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Yo me gusta Russia!

Y me gusta USA!

Porque me gusta los paises?

Yo no se!


This chorus says that I like both USA and Russia. My plan is to throw a bunch of reasons as to why, and say one country that I do not like or something. I got the idea from an old Russan song that is called "10 причин" or something like that!

Makenna Refran

Posted by Morgan Marant in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

¿De dónde vengo yo?
¿De dónde vengo yo?
Vengo a Fances 
Bahamas y Africa 
Yo quiero ir los
Yo quiero ir los


My refrán is communicating that I am of French, African and Bahamian descent. I also say that I would like to visit these places. I like that it gets the point across. I would like to change some parts because my song does not rhyme. Nothing was really difficult, I would just like for my refran to rhyme.   

Miqual Sanders

Posted by Michael Sanders in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Mi nombre es MIQUAL.!!!!!

​Mi nombre es MIQUAL.!!!!!

Yo mi gusto. el comida.

Yo comido el pollo y el sandwhiches.

Y Yo siempre es hambre.


It is suppose to commnicate that I like food and that food effects my life.

My first 2 lines is something I'm really proud about.

I would like to start on my first verse.

It was difficult writing while doing other homework. A little overwhelming.

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