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Cancion De Anastasia

Posted by Symone Smith in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Vengo de un lugar tranquillo.

Una casa de amor.

Vengo de la musica

Y bailar.

 

Vengo de la familia de Smith.

Un nombe común

Pero con rasgos ünicos.

Vengo de donde los ladrillos son ponían

Alto suficiente a cubrian.

 

Vengo de un lugar tranquillo.

Una casa de amor.

Vengo de la musica

Y bailar.

 

Soy De Filadelfia.

Donde edificios brillantes suben.

y carros moscas.

Vengo de dónde todos vivan para sueños.

Pero todos no llegan los sueños.

 

Vengo de un lugar tranquillo.

Una casa de amor.

Vengo de la musica

Y bailar.

 


1.I am proud that I incorporated both things about me personally and also things about the city that I come from. 
2.I might have to use some simpler words so that they flow nicely with the beat I choose.
3.I tried to hit all the basics, stuff about me personally and also about Philly.
4.I think that I am going to take a beat from another song that i like.

Mi Cancion

Posted by Shamarlon Yates in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Verso 1


De donde yo vengo

Hay mucho amor

Una gran familia

Todos mis amigos me conocen desde la infancia

No hay nunca un momento aburrido

Yo vengo de un lugar

Donde puedo ser libre

Deporte y fraternidad

Un pequeño país en el mapa

Pero este es un país donde la felicidad vidas.



Refrán


Vengo de donde hay las playas

Las granjas y el sol hermoso

gente amable y deliciosa comida.



Verso 2


Un lugar donde reina la libre

No Estados Unidos, sino que funciona de la misma

Mi casa para siempre

No es perfecto

El lugar para estar

Mi casa Jamaica.


Refrán


Vengo de donde hay las playas

Las granjas y el sol hermoso

gente amable y deliciosa comida.



Refrán


Vengo de donde hay las playas

Las granjas y el sol hermoso

gente amable y deliciosa comida.



Mi Reflexión



+ What are you especially proud of?

I am especially proud that I was able to use my class time wisely to work on my song. I am also proud that I was able to finish my song on time. I am also proud that I was able to address the question ¿De dónde vengo yo?


+ What do you anticipate having to change before recording your song?

I think that I might add another verse or I might make my existing verses a little longer. I also might adjust some of my lyrics so that the song sound better. There is so much I still want to say so I have to work on getting this into the song.


+ What did you talk about in your song? Why did you choose to talk about those things in talking about where you are from?

I talked about the geography of Jamaica, my friends, my family and all the good memories I have of my home country. I talked about these things because they helped to shape who I am today and they are a part of my culture, heritage and identity.

I think that I might add another verse or I might make my existing verses a little longer. I also might adjust some of my lyrics so that the song sound better. There is so much I still want to say so I have to work on getting this into the song.


+ What kind of music are you planning on setting your lyrics to?

I am planning on setting my lyrics to some medium paced lyrics. Not too fast by at the same time not too slow. 

La Cancin Completa

Posted by Chelsea Smith in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

I'm especially proud of my refran because it answers the question all in 3 little lines and is able to catch onto pretty easily. Its just simple and that's how most songs are.
The only thing that I might have to change is the type of beat I'm going to use since I have to make sure the that the words go well with the beat.
I talked about the types of things in my neighborhood and how we live a regular week.
I plan on having the beat from the song "Danza Kuduro" it has a fast pace to it and I enjoy the way it flows with my lyrics.

HO to the LA

Posted by Pauline Garcia in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

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  • I'm really proud that its easy for me to think what I want to say to my song. So far people like my lyrics and I guess thats a good start!
  • I just want people to look over my lyrics and ask some advice if I need to change anything before I start to record my song. 
  • In my song I was just describing what my country looks like. I was talking about the mountains, the ocean, and the corn fields. I also talked about the kids laughing, the cars, and the birds singing. Just to give the listeners some picture and audio image of what I'm talking about. 
  • I'm planning to have a mellow or kind of a lullaby.  

De La Alma

Posted by Mecca Sharrieff in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Yo vengo de los arboles y el río cafe 
Calles y corazones de piedra del adoquín 

Somos de la luna y el sol 
Pero una vida nueva es que queremos 
Dondé no hay casas almas y rotas 
y las almas no necesitan almas nuevas 
Porqué el sol es una día nueva y la luna es la noche
con las problemas de ayer 
¿Dondé está el paz? (2x) 

​Yo vengo de los arboles y el río cafe 
Calles y corazones de piedra del adoquín 

Hay almas muertas en el río y 
nadie sabe por qué
Hay almas muertas en tú corazón y 
nadie sabe por qué 

Pero, ¿Dondé está ellos ahora? ...

Ellos son en nuestra corazones

Yo vengo de los arboles y el río cafe 
Calles y corazones de piedra del adoquín 

Sierra Dinvil Refrain

Posted by Sierra Dinvil in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Soy de ..

Soy de ..

Soy de filadelfia 

que es donde yo vivo

pero yo so Haiti 

que es mi casa 


My refrain is supposed to show that I live in Philadelphia, but my heart is in Haiti.
I'm happy that I have a refrain that flows together.
I think that I would like to make it longer..
It was difficult to find things that flow together and would fit well in a song.

Mi Refrn

Posted by Shamarlon Yates in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Vengo de donde hay las playas
Las granjas y el sol hermoso
Gente amable y deliciosa comida.


- What is your refrán supposed to communicate?

My refrán is supposed to communicate a general description about the people, geography and food of Jamaica.


- What are you especially happy about with your first draft?

I am happy that it flows and the lyrics just go together. All the lines come together to  paint the picture that I want the audience to see.


- What would you like to improve about your refrán?

I want to make my refrán longer and maybe improve the quality of the lyrics.


- What was difficult about writing your refrán?

The only difficult part was coming up with a topic that I wanted to address in the refrán. After I got this, it was pretty easy.

Refran

Posted by Pauline Garcia in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Hola chico 
Ha estado en la Filipinas?
¿Puedes oír el océano?
¿Puedes sentir el viento?
Bienvenidos a mi madre tierra!

~ On the first stanza of the song, the singer is talking to a kid. She's asking if the kid knows about the Philippines and if the kid can feel the things that the singer feels. 

~ I was happy about my first draft because I already have an idea on what my song is going to be about. I'm planning to have a ballad. Kind of a poem or song, story telling for short. 

~ I wanted to improve some because I'm still thinking on what sounds good for the song. 

~ Matching the words to the rhythm of the song. 

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