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Alysha R. Ortiz refran

Posted by Alysha Ortiz in Spanish 3 - Gierke on


-what is your refran supposed to communicate?

a donde yo vivo y que yo gusta


-what are you espically happy about with your first draft?

yo lo hice


-what would you like to improve about your refran first draft?

tratar de limpiar lo que puede ser en una canción


- what was diffcult about writing your refran?

tratando de hacer una canción

Refran- Johan sebastian rosaro

Posted by Malik Tlili in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​refrán : me llamo es rosaro:
            y el nombre de me pero es dinero


my refrán is short and it communicates with the listeners because it is simple and those are the only two things needed to know about myself "Roasaro" i am happy with the attractiveness of my refrán. it pulls listeners in and makes the song interesting. i would like to check the spelling and maybe make my refrán longer. the thing that was difficult about writing my refrán is thinking of the correct way to say what i want. 

Bethany song refran

Posted by Bethany Carter in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Uno lado un mi familia es grande.
Uno lado un mi familia es pequeña.
Tenemos vos alto pero sabemos oír otros.
Casi todo el mundo encuentran lo confuso.
Yo crecí con ellos.

The refrán is supposed to communicate that my family is loud and confusing but for me its normal.
I like that I was able to not feel as limited by the words I could choose from.
I would like to improve the flow of it so it would be easier to sing.
The difficult part was finding the right translation in the dictionary. 

21/9: Ahorita

Posted by Ronald Jackson in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Soy de Filadelfia
La zoo de Filadelfia
Es mi zoo favorito
¡Sí, es mi vida!

Ir al zoo todas las dias
Es qué yo gusta
Es mi casa cierto
¡Sí, tú y yo!

My refrain shows of my love for the Philadelphia Zoo.

I am happiest with the choice of words that I used in my first draft.

I would like to improve the words that I used at the end of each line. My hope is for it to eventually rhyme.

The most difficult part was trying to find words that rhyme.

Rugei & Mabintu

Posted by Rugeiatu Bah in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

  • Share the first version of your refrán.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán?
  • Nosotros Africáno, más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno,más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno, Vamoso!
  • Africaaaaaaaaaa Nosotros Donte. Awooo!
  • Nosotros Africáno, ¿yo no oyes tu?
  • Nosotros Africáno, más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno,más fuerte!
  • Nosotrosl Africáno, Vamoso!

Nostroso
  • Share the first version of your refrán.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán?
  • Nosotros Africáno, más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno,más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno, Vamoso!
  • Africaaaaaaaaaa Nosotros Donte. Awooo!
  • Nosotros Africáno, ¿yo no oyes tu?
  • Nosotros Africáno, más fuerte!
  • Nosotros  Africáno,más fuerte!
  • Nosotrosl Africáno, Vamoso!

Goldie Robins -Refrn

Posted by Goldie Robins in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

My Refrán:

Yo soy de Europa a los Estados Unidos
Yo soy de Pennsylvania
Soy del barrio de Filadelfia
Yo soy de.

​1) Where I come from. 
2)I am happy with having it done, and that I actually thought of one.
3) Go over to see if I made an grammar mistakes and to make sure it makes sense. 
4)It was hard to think about what to say, especially when you think in english then you don't know what to say in spanish. 

Ahorita 9/21/11

Posted by Matthew Ferry in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Mi escuela es muy raro
Philadelphia tiene malo callea
poco es muy importante a me.
Me gusta monto mi bici.

    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
      My refrán is suppose to communicate very small/brief information about me. 

    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
      Not too much.  I'm most likely going to edit, so instead of it being brief info, it has more meaning to it than that. 

    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
      Mostly everything. 

    • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
      Finding exactly what to put into it. 

Refrn

Posted by Sean Force in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

1. My refrain is supposed to tell about where I'm from.
2. I am especially happy that I got it done finally after sitting and thinking for forever.
3. I might have liked to make it rhyme or flow a bit better.
4. Thinking of what to say in it and trying to write it in general.

Marina Pyfrom's Song

Posted by Marina Pyfrom in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​fiesta de rock! 
De dónde vengo yo
Vamos 
2X

Its a fun song. I want the refrain to be easy and simple so my audience can sing too. My chorus will set the stage for the verses. 
Yes because it is catchy which means audience can quickly catch on and sing. 
Maybe add another line into. I haven't decided yet because I kind of like it the way it already is. 
Just trying to make the lines catchy especially in spanish and just making it flow throughout the song. 

Yo escucha sirenas de la policía.
sueños ser una bailarina.
Vivo con Mi mamá .
no drama
Ella es importante y muy elegante.
Mi casa es en Filadelphia

My first verse tells a little about where I'm from but goes in more about my mother. 
I like the first too lines because the rhyme scheme and also the message. 
I wanna take more about my mom and our relationship. So there will be more lines added. 
The most difficult part is answering the question in an intelligent Spanish 3 student way. Being that our vocabulary is limited we can not say what we want to make the song great. So we have to do the best we can and hope for the best.

Yo vengo de una familia.
Me gusta que mi familia es pequeña.
Tenemos una relacion buena.
Una vez al año hay reunión
Por que tradición.

My second first talks about my family and its characteristics.
I love my second verse because the message is perfect for the essential question and its rhymes successfully. 
I think I want to make this my first verse just because It answers the question more and just simply amazing.
I had no difficulty this verse because I let my mind wonder and did not pressure myself with the rhyming. It just came to my brain and I loved it so I used it.  

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