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Ahorita.

Posted by Annisa Ahmed in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Refrán:
Yo vivo en el silencio
Pero hablan
La cuidad hablan

It supposed to show the sounds of the city.
The three lines seem to flow, kind of like poetry.
Adding some more lines could help.
Creating it was easy.

De donde vengo yo

Posted by Aidan Rios in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Soy de Puerto Rico pero naci aqui en Filadelfia. Lo que es un influencia de Puerto Rico es la comida y la musica. De donde vengo, todo es de respeto. Trata una persona con respeto y ello te respecta a usted. Pero, una falta de respecto y los hentes van reir de ti y ignorara ti.  



My refrain is suppose to communicate that Ricardito is from Puerto Rico also that he is ready to talk about where he comes from and how it’s like. 

Im kinda happy that I got to talk about the main thing that is Puerto rican.

 I would like to improve my details and the length that it is.

What was really hard was coming up what to write or what to mention.  



Refran

Posted by Matthew Walker in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Estamos de dos uno cinco

Y dinero 

que vivimos, la respiración, y comer philly

porque esta es nuestra ciudad



- My refrain is supposed to communicate that I am from Philadelphia
- I am happy that I was able to come up with a good refrain 
- I would like to improve the fact that the whole thing is not about philly 
- what was difficult was trying to rhyme it 

CSheridan;MySong

Posted by Cyndilynn Sheridan in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Cyndi Lynn Sheridan

Español 3 – D

El 21 de Septiembre

 

La ciudad del amor fraternal,

Una lugar único y orignal.

Grande esperanzas pero suenos rotos,
Todos carreteras ignotos.

Yo llamo a este casa.

 

o   What is your refrán supposed to communicate?

My refrán is supposed to communicate that the city we live in is filled with a diverse group of people but all share one thing, challenges.

 

o   What are you especially happy about with your first draft?

Catherine and I are really happy with the quality of words we have because they are very descriptive and tell a story with a true meaning.

 

o   What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?

I really wanted the refrán to be longer, but I am satisfied with how everything worked out.

 

o   What was difficult about writing your refrán? 

It was extremely difficult creating a phrase that rhymed with the previous one. Also, this was hard because we only had a set selection of words that did rhyme and made sense to what we were trying to portray.

 

Carolina Latorre Espaol-3

Posted by Maria-Carolina Latorre-Socas in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Vengo de Venezuela y yo vengo de Pensilvana ahora estamos junta cantando de Roxborough en donde vivimos. De día y de noche celebramos y cantamos se vaya. Ya..ya lo sabes todo en Roxborough todos son locos. Pero ahí tiempos que todos se cambian..silenció..oscuro..las calles vacías. Pero esto es Roxborough en donde vivimos.

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    Where we came from and how Roxborought look in our eyes.

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    I finished it and at first it sound good.

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I like to change what it's suppose  to talk about. what I want it to be is the view point/difference between venezuela and philadelphia.

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
    Thinking about what it will be talking about.

Refran

Posted by Cheyenne Pagan in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Perdo de menos mi casa
la energía, la energía,
Nueva York
Un día volveré
Perdo de menos mi casa
el ruido, el ruido
música para mis oídos

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    It's supposed to communicate what I love about the place I was born. Even though I live in Philly I consider New York my home. 

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    That it has good content and that it does resemble all those things in seven short lines. 

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to make it sound more musical and take a look at the rhyming words in spanish and try to incorporate that in to the entire song without losing the meaning that I want it to have. 

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
    I don't think anything was particularly difficult about writing it but it's only my first draft and revising it is going to be the hardest part. 

Catherine Nardone - my song.

Posted by Catherine Nardone in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

  • Share the first version of your refrán.

La ciudad del amor fraternal,

Una lugar único y orignal.

                          Grande esperanzas pero suenos rotos,
                          Todos carreteras ignotos.
                          Yo llamo a este casa.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
  • Our refrán is supposed to communicate that we live in the city of brotherly love, a place that's unique and original. A place where people have high hopes, but troubled dreams, where all roads are unknown. But, most of all that this is the place that we call home.
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
  • Yes, we were happy about the first draft because of how we worded I think. It's deep, yet fun.
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
  • I think that we would like to make it a little bit longer.
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
  • The most difficult part was rhyming. We had a hard time doing that with only a limited amount of words that actually made sense with what we were trying to say and that rhymed well.

Refran

Posted by Yasmeen Brownlee in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

filadelphia es muy importante en mi vida

mejor amigos y muy actividades


What is your refrán supposed to communicate?

My Refran is supposed to communicate my feeling about philadelphia as my home as a whole.
What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
I worked on it so i know what i want to say, even though it's not complete
What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
More wording, As well as a stronger grasp of the spanish vocab and the question.
What was difficult about writing your refrán?
Before i wrote it down i wasn't sure how i was going to go about this project. Now that I wrote something it will be easier for me to revise.

Mi Refran

Posted by Tyler Morales in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

Refrán:

​Mi nombre es Aiert,
Vengo yo Nueva Jersey,
No me gusta Nueva Jersey,
Mi casa es aburrido.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
      I come from New Jersey and it was very boring there.
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
      I tried explaining that my house in New Jersey was boring
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
      Make it rhyme, I couldn't think of words and find some that rhymed
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
      Thinking of what to put in my refrán.

De donde vengo yo?

Posted by Katherine Hatzidais in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​refrán: 
yo soy de un lugar
donde las cosas más simples son buenos
donde el amor es profundo
donde las sonrisas son amplias


  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    My refrán is suppose to communicate that even though things can be tough, theres still a few things that remain the same. 

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    I am happy about the words because I think they are strong words. 

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to see if I could write it in a different way or say something even more meaningful. 

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán?  
    I think it was difficult to write something meaningful that could possibly have rhythm. 

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