American History - Laufenberg Public Feed
The Emancipation Proclamation
I decided to complete my project on Abraham Lincoln and the emancipation proclamation. I wanted to change what if he would have never created or sign the emancipation proclamation how would life be like today. Would the slaves be free like they are today or would they still be enslaved? Well if you listen to my pod cast that me and my Aunt Samira has put together then it will explain everything and so much more. I HOPE YOU ENJOY :)
click for the.... The Emancipation Proclamation (Script)
Benchmark Reflection
I like being able to talk to my aunt about what the project was about and she helped me put together a really interesting project that is full of fun facts that I had a nice time learning about. The most challenge part about this project was making the primary sources for what we had changed and because it did not really exist is what really made it harder but I came though some what and when I found out what I had to do and understood it I was on my job and got as much as possible done. The most interesting fact or event that investigated was the fact that Abraham really didn't want to pass the emancipation proclamation and when he did it really didn't do much for the actual slave stated I mean don't get me wrong it did help some but very few. So that was the most interesting part for me. I think that any one can change history it is a very powerful thing to do but it is very possible for example look at Obama he was just a regular African American man who was just successful and now he is the first black president so I think any individual can have an impact on our future. When bills and different things of that nature are passed really impact the world and the people in it buy what it is saying and how you have to go by things. Historic things can affect the world around us in a blink of an eye if we look at our history it has been change in so many ways we cant even explain in short words but has been done to take an effect for year with a bank of an eye. This project could improve my maybe giving topics to chose from that way were can stick to one thing and that is that. If I could change something I did differently about this project it would have to be time management and also getting clarification sooner. Other than that I really put in time and hard work in to my emancipation proclamation project all over.
TFarah History/English Q4 BM
I really liked the research aspect of this project, because even though sifting through so much information was hard, it sort of had that lazy-fun-ness of when you're reading something on Wikipedia that links to another article so you start reading that, and you end up somewhere totally unexpected. It was especially fun because it was something I already had some interest in education, even though I hadn't really expected to be doing a project about education reform. I knew that changing Bill Gates' childhood would have a huge impact on the computer industry, but it was strange to see how that effect carried over to the realm of politics and public education. It was also weirdly interesting to look pictures of really, really old computers, and to see how many other people had made their own predictions of what 2011 would look like without Microsoft.
If I did this project again, I would make sure I started with a clearer idea of exactly what I wanted the project to be. I had ideas for my fake primary sources when I started, but I didn't really think about how I would put them together into a single project, and I feel like it's a bit awkward to just have a bunch of random papers. I also found the graphic organizer really helpful. I think if you do this project again, you should have some additional organization tools for students, because with a project like this it's really easy to just get totally lost.
American Transportation - What if?
Reflection: I greatly enjoyed this project. I found the ability to deeply study one piece of history and change one aspect to create a new one quite intriguing. While fulfilling, it was challenging to find the tiny details that would change the outcome of history. The most interesting thing that I researched was the individual impacts of Senator Pell and the founder of the NARPA on the magnitude of future outcomes. Specifically, their efforts in advocating for the bill were the sole reasons that Amtrak and rail transportation exists today. They are only one example of individuals having such an impact on the historical record. Systemic changes also affect the historical record in many ways. For example, if Amtrak was never founded, the 9/11 Shanksville, PA crash. In addition, these all revolved around the one decision as to whether or not Amtrak should be created. In the future, I would like to see a possible adaptation wherein students could work in a pair with two separate changes and create an alternate history based upon two separate PODs. Also, if I were to repeat the process, I would create more primary sources for each event and expand my list of events even further.
Whitney Washington Libby, Montana Asbestos Contamination
Be Concise- We knew or information very well
Be Visual- Being visual was accomplished, but the words were too small :[
Be Smarter- We believe that we were very smart about the information that we did decide to use.
Be Transparent- We were transparent in the sense that we were un biased.
Be Different- We chose a different approach than that of our peers
Be Accurate- We presented 100% correct information from our sources
Be Attractive- I looked pretty darn good the day of the presentation :D
Be Varied- The different styles of presentation we used in our project were different for each person
Be Gracious- being gracious did not work through out project becuase the topics did not flow well
Be Creative- We werent too creative
Great Pacific Garbage Patch, forreal this time :)
Libby, Montana Asbestos Contamination : Nadif, Newon, Whitney
a. What went well?
Nothing really except that we turned in the project.
b. What did not?
We barely worked with it each I felt completely useless for this project
c. What would you do differently next time?
I would rather we worked together and actually listened to each other.
And as for these,
Be Concise
Be Visual
Be Smarter
Be Transparent
Be Different
Be Accurate
Be Attractive
Be Varied
Be Gracious
Be Creative
We were average in all of them except with creativity because our info-graph was nothing but words and pictures.
Final Infographic-Exxon Valdez
My group really worked well and was very productive during class time and time when we did research on our google doc at home. We also gathered a lot of information in order to complete the project thoroughly.
b. What did not?
After looking at a project with a perfect score I feel like we didn't do well with the visual aspect. We were going to create a picture timeline put we didn't have time because we spent so much time gathering facts an information to incorporate into our final project.
c. What would you do differently next time?
Timeline of images going around the oil spiral
Chart of oil levels
Timeline of what the spill was the size of
Picher, Oklahoma Lead Contamination
a. What went well?
-We, as a group, did our part as individuals. We worked well as a group.
b. What did not?
-We all did not read the directions correctly that resulted us into making the correct infograph.
c. What would you do differently next time?
-Read the directions carefully
d. Specifically comment on the 10 tips for effective infographics -
Be Concise
When you view our infograph, you can easily see the contamination of what the mine has done and process of trying to clean the mine.
Be Visual
There's not too much going on. It's not crowded on our infograph. . Everything is well organized
Be Smarter
You can see the historical population throughout the years and the decreasing of numbers, as well as the a bar graph to visually see the differences.
Be Transparent
We were very transparent when it came down to sources and much more. We did a great job in that category and gave the reader/viewer a chance to explore more into the topic.
Be Different
We have data charts but we weren't as different honestly.
Be Accurate
Our data is accurate as well as our research. We've sited different helpful sources.
Be Attractive
-Falls into visual, we did a good job making it presentable and organization.
Be Varied
Important info. is only needed into the infograph. Easy for viewers to view.
Be Gracious
-We only put the important facts, enough information where our viewers can understand what the lead contamination is is and few images to back up our info.
Be Creative
-creativity falls into visual and we've made it easier for viewers to read rather than paragraphs but important points. As long as attractiveness with the style of how things were set up.
Final Infographics- Yadi Angeles
a. What went well?
The research and getting everything together.
b. What did not?
Talking about our research and deciding what to drop in terms of information.
c. What would you do differently next time?
I would speak up about the decisions for our infographic, because I feel that we could have done a better job in the visualness.
d. Specifically comment on the 10 tips for effective infographics -
Be Concise
Be Visual
Be Smarter
Be Transparent
Be Different
Be Accurate
Be Attractive
Be Varied
Be Gracious
Be Creative
Which of these areas did you excel in? Which were not so well represented? Why do you think some elements of design were easier or harder to include in the end product?
Some well represented were Transparent, Different, Accurate, and Varied. I feel like creatively we could have done much more and that we didn't add all the information that we could have so that things made more sense.
tn coal ash spill
-i dont think that there were any bumbs in the work that we created we were on task
3. What would you do differently next time?
i wouldnt use captions
4. Specifically comment on the 10 tips for effective infographics -
Be Concise
Be Visual
Be Smarter
Be Transparent
Be Different
Be Accurate
Be Attractive
Be Varied
Be Gracious
Be Creative
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